Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/UnNews:Monkey replaces George W. Bush as president; Americans notice improvement

Shutupnoob11's first ever aticle, Needs judgement first. --NXWave 03:23, 2 November 2007 (UTC)

Humour:	7	It was alright, not exactly the best thing I've ever read, but if it's a first article, its not too bad. The story kind of felt a little random but still, it's alright.
Concept:	8	Chimps, making fun of Bush, stupid people, what could be better?
Prose and formatting:	10	I never really understood what this section was for, so it gets a 10.
Images:	7	I like the Monkey in the fancy outfit pictures, however, they are too on top of each other. Move one to the other side of the page, it'd look better.
Miscellaneous:	8	The Nobody cares link needs to be shortener to just nobody cared enough. Drop the really, its just extra unneeded wording.
Final Score:	40	It's an alright UnNews for a first article. It could use a bit of work. Not much though.
Reviewer:	--General And Min. THE DUDE MAN 03:37, 2 November 2007 (UTC)

Also, I'm not an English teacher. Just in case you're wondering.

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