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Voted Sexiest Person Alive[edit source]

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Entering first comments

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23:47, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

Humour: 5 needs more of a kick to it in my opinion
Concept: 4 It's quite cliche tbh, but still might be worth expanding
Prose and formatting: 5 It needs a lot of work, maybe the article could be in a more magazine-like style
Images: 7 The image is alright, but atm it makes the rest of the article unimportant
Miscellaneous: 4 way too short, it doesn't really develop
Final Score: 25 it could gain some strength, moving the focus to the username gag to make it more a parody of silly magazine awards
Reviewer: --SonOfPhyllis 23:57, June 7, 2010 (UTC)