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UnBooks:Hospital[edit source]
I've always been a sucker for the UnBooks tone...anyways, reviewers, do your worst! - P.M., WotM, & GUN, Sir Led Balloon (Tick Tock) (Contribs) 17:18, Apr 22
UnBooks:Hospital is being reviewed by Your Source for Fine Scented Pee And Whatever Else Comes Out Of Him |
- Revenge! Revenge for all those miserable months I was your noob! ...oh wait... • <Apr 22, 2008 [23:35]>
Humour: | 8.1 | avg of each of those section thingies =from 7.6 overall to 8.1=
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Concept: | 8 | I've reviewed three or so hospital drama unscripts (why isn't this an unscript?) and three or so "cop out of control" or "parody of cop out of control" unscripts so far. This doesn't really add anything new to what I've seen, TLB! Sorry! =from 7 to 8. Mixing genres? That sounds like a GREAT idea!= |
Prose and formatting: | 8 | Yes, go and clean up the things that I said to clean up. =from 7 to 8. Much cleaner, sir= |
Images: | 7 | The only image that really caught my attention was the robot one, which was awesome. =no changes I could see= |
Miscellaneous: | 7.8 | avg, duh =From 7.4 to 7.8= |
Final Score: | 38.9 | This article needs some work, but I think you'll come up with something: You always come through, Led. Take a look at that "courtroom-hospital" drama idea... interesting... =from 33.8 to 37 to 38.8= |
Reviewer: | • <Apr 23, 2008 [4:40]> |
- A-ight, I added just a tinge more, and I'm curious. Do those extra couple sentences I added to "Room 1109" merit keeping? Also, does the ending feel endingy enough? - P.M., WotM, & GUN, Sir Led Balloon (Tick Tock) (Contribs) 00:34, Apr 24
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