Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/The Mars Volta
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The Mars Volta[edit source]
M'kay, so, I rewrote the existing Mars Volta article because a) it was listed for deletion anyway and b) it wasn't all that great. I would prefer someone familiar with TMV's music review this article, as it wouldn't make much sense to a non-fan. So yeah. Guildensternenstein 19:37, 1 February 2009 (UTC)
Humour: | 5 | This article wasn't exactly funny, but it had good lyrics for the song. To make your article more funny, I suggest reading HTBFANJS, although your article wasn't stupid at all. |
Concept: | 8 | The concept for this article was a good one, heck, you included lyrics for the song! |
Prose and formatting: | 8 | I don't think you made any spelling or grammar mistakes in your article, but it wasn't written in an normal encyclopedia-type sytle, but it is still pretty good! |
Images: | 3 | Most of the images used in your article had almost absolutely nothing to do with the article, but the ones that did were good ones. |
Miscellaneous: | 6 | Pretty good article, so I gave the overall rating a 6 |
Final Score: | 30 | Areas to focus on are: make it funny and have better images. |
Reviewer: | Skate1168 02:07, 2 February 2009 (UTC) |