Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/HowTo:Get a Life
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HowTo:Get a Life[edit source]
I'm claiming this one! -- Rt Hon W E Gladstone MP GOM | Converse | 16:04, 11 July 2008 (UTC)
Auk 15:40, 11 July 2008 (UTC)
Humour: | 5.4 | I wanted to do this one; inherently, it's a funny idea. Look! You're a computer geek! Get out of your house and interact with someone who doesn't speak three different programming languages or have a fully developed 'Second Life' relationship!
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Concept: | 7 | It really should be funny - it's inherently a great concept. How often do we say, in jest or otherwsie, "get a life"? What do we mean? That's the joke you're trying to get at, but it's what's not quite hitting the target. |
Prose and formatting: | 5 | This lets the article down, to be honest.
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Images: | 7 | The images are good, entertaining, with reasonable captions. For a longer article and a better score you'd need to have more pictures; perhaps before and after pictures are a good one, or testemonials from people who got a life. |
Miscellaneous: | 6.1 | Averaged |
Final Score: | 30.5 | 30.5 is a very reasonable score I think. It could be brilliant; with a bit of work I'd certainly nominate it VFH. It's not brilliant yet though. I'm going to keep an eye - if I have time I might contribute to it to help because I like the premise and I'd love to see it turn into the great article it could be. |
Reviewer: | Rt Hon W E Gladstone MP GOM | Converse | 21:34, 11 July 2008 (UTC) |